I think it looks good...I'd call it "done". I often have to grab Tess and tell her, "Quit fooling with it...it's done!!" Artists are that way.
If the printer you have has the option for printing on transparencies, you might get some dowel, cut thin slices, sand, then get a label sheet, full size, of the transparent labels. Good way to make up some mock-ups before committing to an expensive printing job.